Hello blogger
We are trying to change a story from a 3rd person / narrator to a 1st person. We had to :
- Pronoun:ย He, Him, His, Her,She’s Her’s
- Mine Events.
- ย Jack grew up as someone who steals fromย people in the town.
- Jack climbs the tree
- Jack finds a giant castle amidst the clouds
Here is my first paragraph:
Mum said “Go to the shop to buy meat for Dinner! Off I went but I was distracted by a beggar heย
offered me lollies that are magic and would makeย my dreams come true. I thought I always wanted to be rich and not miss out on meals.
Here is the three paragraph:
But the beggar told me that there’s a condition i have to meet before i could grant my wish, I had to plant the lollies and climb the tree that grows from the lollies and defeat the giant in the castle.
Hi See Me, Thank you for sharing you story, I would be interested to see how he felt about his Mum’s reaction when he got home with loolies to plant instead of the meat for dinner. As I Mum who like more than just vegetables I would not be happy, even if it meant being rich later.